Huh looks good but kind of messy but not really in a good way. There’s just too much going on, not really sure why you added the motorcycle or katana. Cybernetics are fine. I don’t want to sound overly critical of your artistic design but I think some proper set design could help a lot, though I’m not sure if that’s the right word for it. Not really sure what to consider cyberpunk here if I’m being honest. It seems that you thought similarly with the random placement of things. Still not bad. I’ve seen some 3D renders by professional groups pretending to be teenagers but your work is alright for a single person job.
Flaxans
Thanks for the feedback. A few of the tuna fish sellers in Tsukiji fish markets tend to use katana length knives to cut their fish. The character is loosely based on the ‘Tuna King’ of Tsukiji. The whole concept was a Cyberpunk setting minus the high tech weapons and the cyberspace stuff.
I’m also definitely just one person who is way too old too be a teen.
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Good job anon
GoliathTCB
This is really fun, i think my favorite is seeing the boxing match on the TV in the bg
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Huh looks good but kind of messy but not really in a good way. There’s just too much going on, not really sure why you added the motorcycle or katana. Cybernetics are fine. I don’t want to sound overly critical of your artistic design but I think some proper set design could help a lot, though I’m not sure if that’s the right word for it. Not really sure what to consider cyberpunk here if I’m being honest. It seems that you thought similarly with the random placement of things. Still not bad. I’ve seen some 3D renders by professional groups pretending to be teenagers but your work is alright for a single person job.
Thanks for the feedback. A few of the tuna fish sellers in Tsukiji fish markets tend to use katana length knives to cut their fish. The character is loosely based on the ‘Tuna King’ of Tsukiji. The whole concept was a Cyberpunk setting minus the high tech weapons and the cyberspace stuff.
I’m also definitely just one person who is way too old too be a teen.
Good job anon
This is really fun, i think my favorite is seeing the boxing match on the TV in the bg