[OC] I added more cyberpunk elements and fixed my comic page as you recommend. Any Advice?
[OC] I added more cyberpunk elements and fixed my comic page as you recommend. Any Advice?
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Last time,you guys gave me tons of advice on how to improve my work. With your feedback, my team and I made a new page for our Cyberpunk comic called “Ronin of Okane.” I hope you like it and hope to get some more feedback from you. Any advice is welcome!
Thx, guys!
Eu me pergunto, será que as coisas vão ser tão parecidas com as que temos hoje?
A muito tempo, não contavam e nem imaginavam que teríamos smartphones tão avançados, mas hoje é uma coisa tão comum, assim como um smartphone dobrável.
As coisas mudam radicalmente, e eu acho que não vai ser diferente com o nosso futuro. Vai parecer mágica.
When I hear “cyberpunk” it always makes me immediately think of the lights. Neon. Bright, pink, cyan, green, etc.
Could you add a few light elements maybe? The picture is gorgeous btw the detail in it is amazing.
Dunno if this is what you’re asking, so if I’m out of line lemme know and I’ll take this comment down. I can’t tell if this lady is really tall, or if her counter is really short. Average height for people and countertops in America usually puts most countertops right around bellybutton level. Hers is right around upper thigh level. That would either make her counters 6-8 inches shorter than average, or her legs 6-8 in longer than average.
Again, this is based on averages for my locality. If it’s a culture difference I’d be very interested in the hows and whys behind it!