
So over the past few months I've been trying my hand at worldbuilding, and creating a Cyberpunk world in particular as I love the genre and have been playing the game (not sure if I can say what the 'game' is without getting the post removed lol) for a while.
If the main 'point' of this world doesn't come across great in my writing, it is that Corporations take advantage of Manhattan State's thriving and new economy (similar to the economic boom of West Germany after WWII) but put the lives of the civilians below them, shoving all possible advertisements in their face to try and convince them to buy what they're selling. The value of money over life is taken to the extreme.
Also, the maps on the images didn't load so I had to create one up quickly so there was context and you could visualise what I was describing.
If there are any critisisms on my writing I will happily take them for my own improvement and if there are any questions I will be happy to answer.
It's still a work in progress and I am still thinking up new 'netics and weapons.
Thanks!